Author’s note: This is
an epilogue on the book Touching Spirit Bear, by Ben Mikaelsen. I chose
to do an epilogue because the main character, Cole, saw a white bear tried to
kill it, and almost got killed by it. Then Cole eventually ignored the bear and
got scared of it. I personally thought he should’ve killed the bear and feel
fame and glory. That’s why I have created an epilogue to it.
During
morning sunrise, I was just minding my own business until I heard something. I
turned slowly and saw a giant white bear. “Go on! Beat it,” I screamed. The
bear remained still. Why isn’t this bear afraid of me? I’ll show who the boss
is. I turned around and grabbed my knife. When I turned around to go attack the
bear, the bear was gone. “What the,” I asked myself. I figured it was nothing
so I went to back on finding my food.
During the night
As I turned
to the forest, there I saw it, the giant spirit bear. I felt anger rushing
through me. “Why isn’t this bear scared of me?” I thought to myself. As I
grabbed my spear and yelled my battle cry, the monster started to run away.
“Don’t run away from me!” I screamed running after it.
A storm
whipped by with blasting thunder, I was sprinting through the forest after the
beast. As I was running, the storm was coming closer and lightning came with
pelting rain. Finally the bear stopped
moving. “I’ve got you now!” I screamed.
When I was coming closer I stopped figuring
out why the monster stopped, there was a dead end cliff. Once more I raised my
spear and charged forward. Right as I stabbed the hard chest, lightning made
contact with me and the bear. As I screamed with pain and the bear roaring, I
fell backward and blacked out, but right before I did, I saw the horrible thing
finally die as it fell backwards off the cliff.
About one year later
As I was on
the beach in the brisk morning, I saw the policemen’s boat coming by and I
couldn’t wait to go home. I know completely that this island has changed me. I
feel good for taking out the spirit bear. I was able to get all of my anger
out. I’m going to go apologize to Peter for what I did. It was wrong just hurt
him because I was mad. Now I’m going to get on the boat and start a new life.
The epilogue is supposed to be at the end of the book when Cole and Peter become friends. Not after the bear almost kills him.
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