Thursday, January 26, 2012

Through Mrs. Jones's Mind


            Author’s note: This is about a point of view piece that is about Mrs. Jones point of view. Her point of view changes throughout the story when she realizes that boy who robs her needs help. In the end, she changes this boy so he won't rob anyone again.

            Hi I'm Mrs. Jones and I'm here to talk about how I changed a boy's life. I was thinking from the minute that I was getting robbed by a boy, Roger, I thought that this boy was crazy. I started feeling a little sad for Roger once I realized that he didn't have any food and nobody lived with him. He was only about sixteen years old.  When I started to feel sorry for him I told him that I did bad things too. This is what I told him, "I have done things, too, which I would not tell you." (p.3). So I brought to my house and decided to change him. I figured I should give him some food and milk. In the end, I wanted to be nice and gave him $10 so he could buy some shoes.

3 comments:

  1. I really like how you used details from the story.
    I think that you authors note could have been shorter.
    Overall it is really good.

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  2. I like your authors note
    I thought you did really well is show what mrs Jones's mind

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  3. Overall great work.
    Just a punctuation error placement I suggest proof reading.

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