Author’s note: This is about a point
of view piece that is about Mrs. Jones point of view. Her point of view changes
throughout the story when she realizes that boy who robs her needs help. In the end, she changes this boy so he won't rob anyone again.
Hi I'm Mrs. Jones and I'm here to talk
about how I changed a boy's life. I was thinking from the minute that I was
getting robbed by a boy, Roger, I thought that this boy was crazy. I started
feeling a little sad for Roger once I realized that he didn't have any food and
nobody lived with him. He was only about sixteen years old. When I started to feel sorry for him I told
him that I did bad things too. This is what I told him, "I have done
things, too, which I would not tell you." (p.3). So I brought to my house
and decided to change him. I figured I should give him some food and milk. In
the end, I wanted to be nice and gave him $10 so he could buy some shoes.
I really like how you used details from the story.
ReplyDeleteI think that you authors note could have been shorter.
Overall it is really good.
I like your authors note
ReplyDeleteI thought you did really well is show what mrs Jones's mind
Overall great work.
ReplyDeleteJust a punctuation error placement I suggest proof reading.