Thursday, May 19, 2011

The poem


author's note: This is a poem I decided to make for a creative piece.

Bees are stinging
Children are crying
Bites are itching
I feel like I’m dying

 My mom is throwing a fit
My dad is about to blow
My brothers are falling into pits.
My sister’s car is getting towed.

 My friends are getting mad
My dogs are biting
I am getting sad
And my cousins are fighting

My friends are leaving
I just heard thunder
People are teasing
I sometimes wonder….
Why does my birthday fall on April fool’s day?

1 comment:

  1. What a fun read! The rhyming scheme fit perfectly with the tone of the topic, which pulled the whole piece together.

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